Wow this is the one! i could feel the pain in ur eyes
But only for constructive critique! it could make a: "diriglet frontier - poisonous object transpassing Effect" if you try to quit the shoulder dark-side energy vegas! it could increase the feeling of it hitted Jack straight against the stomach! if it rotates 45 degrees just infront of the face! in this white space! it could imply a Direct Strike! feelin!
:ko why i love Jack in pain??! specialy when Pitchy Black xD :3 creepy me! :5